1 min readOct 3, 2016
As a general rule, I’d say if you can't recite your positioning statement without the need to read it, it’s not a good positioning statement.
Beyond that… Are you making a claim that’s distinct from the claims every other VC makes? If not, again, I think some deeper thought might be required.
Here’s the methodology I use, FWIW: http://www.forentrepreneurs.com/clarity-of-message/